sprint the blue moon, too far for us to feel when your ears perk-up as i kiss at your neck for days, long tails swift over the powdered snow, so i can follow them again & again, where you like.
i feel a little like i asked you to describe what you see and you did but i had already seen it and you said exactly what i saw. do you know what i mean by that? i mean both a good and a bad thing: good) pristine image with appropriate vagueness as to whys and whens, a clean and peaceful implied palette. bad) there is something that i didn't see when i looked and why don't you tell me that?
to clarify, i do not mean by that analysis that i have apprehended everything that this text has to say. i am talking mostly about the first impression of images as a result of the word choice.
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i feel a little like i asked you to describe what you see and you did but i had already seen it and you said exactly what i saw. do you know what i mean by that? i mean both a good and a bad thing: good) pristine image with appropriate vagueness as to whys and whens, a clean and peaceful implied palette. bad) there is something that i didn't see when i looked and why don't you tell me that?
to clarify, i do not mean by that analysis that i have apprehended everything that this text has to say. i am talking mostly about the first impression of images as a result of the word choice.
i definitely understand what you're saying. i wasn't really intending this to be anything at the time. just sat down and wrote something quick.
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